Please finish this!

International porkey
(In MY opinion)
That is the most famous idea since the light bulb!

Omg I'm crying
But anyways I loved that chapter
And I'm totally enjoying this story

I did not like your writing. It was way too bland and emotionless. I don't mean the action and dialogue is emotionless, it's your writing style, adjectives, etc.

I do like the pregnant idea though.

I'm really hoping you get the new chapter up soon! Great story!

I had not seen that coming I must say but it is a very good idea :)

Good stuff.

Harry needed that

This was so sweet! Loved it! I absolutely love the interactions between everyone, you made it so smooth and natural. I especially liked how George asked Harry about what happened, usually it is Ron or Hermione who seem worried and ask, it is nice to have a change and see all the family worried. I also like how Percy is acting. Usually after war stories, the writers still make him pompous and such. I like how you made Percy.

I forgot, what is Bill doing at Hogwarts?

Umm just saying when Verity died I thought you needed to change the name of the story cause it didn't seem like anyone's heart was healing. Please keep writing it is soo good.

Well I've noticed a few spelling errors but nothing too big. Also (no offence) but I think everyone gets that you don't own Harry Potter. That's all. It's a really good story, makes me cry and smile at the same time. I kind of figured Ange was pregnant when she said 'in the mornings'. Still I really like it.

Wow this is a great chapter - heart breaking, but still great.

OK, so I've never written a review longer than two lines, so be proud of yourself for making me write all of the following. All right, so I read this story in a day, and I love it! The characters are so realistic, and you actually made me cry in a few chapters! (I don't cry easily.) The one thing I don't get is Angelina's pregnancy. She is supposed to have two kids, Fred II (the oldest) and Roxanne (the younger one) with George. I don't think she ever had kids with Fred, and I'm not sure if she had a relationship with him further than the Yule Ball, but if she did it would make sense that it was in secret. Her twins will probably not be like Fred and Roxanne, and I was really hoping you'd make this totally canon. They are supposed to be George's, not Fred's anyway. Will Angelina and George still get married and have Fred and Roxanne? Or will it just be the twins? Other than that, I LOVE this story, and I hope you'll update soon!

xoxo

No.1HPfanLuvsHP

please update. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

This story is soooooo good!