this is a good story! make more!

Oh gosh, this is truly good. It gave me goose bumps in the beginning. I really enjoyed that and wished their was more to read.

Wow this is ace will u write more plz :-)

wow...just all i can say but, i love strawberry scented detergent

Awesome! I really like it so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please! :)