Can you please write some more of this! It's beautiful!

:'( 3 it tho.

I really like this story, it's wonderfully written and I can't wait for an update! The fairy-tale idea is very clever, and I like how you didn't mention Gwen till quite late but you would still know that was who he was talking about. Poor Ianto. He needs a hug :)

Ooh, I like this. What a different take on the Gwen/Ianto/Jack love triangle.

I liked how Gwen and Ianto actually bonded over their mutual affections for Jack instead of pulling eachother's hair out and such. What a different take to the love triangle! I also liked the analogy with the fairytale, it was awesome and very effective. I like the idea of Jack just playing a game with Gwen and that she's caught up in fantasy - an empathetic view on both Ianto and Gwen that I really appreciated. More please! xx

Wow, that's depressing. But good nontheless - continue!

Aww! Poor ianto! Great story!

WOW. This is a great start!

Are you going to keep it going?

It would be great for them to go to the Himalayas, though you would need to check the continuety.

You have a beautiful style, and your work seems very true to the characters.

I love your stories!

I was starting to worry that you'd stopped.

Anyway...

That was great!

Love it! :) please continue, and fast this time ;) love you! :) xx