Looking forward to reading the rewrite. I liked it.

...And the few spelling errors you have made too. Forgot about those.

My only complaint: you switch between present and past tense several times. Other than that, I loved this.

Very creative. Thank you for writing and posting

I really like this idea. I kind of wish you'd flush out the story a little more. It's so short it's over too quickly.

Oh Sherlock.
I understand that the hypothesis is not an unreasonable conclusion but really?

a really interesting concept!

Love this.

OO, I really liked this one. I thought you did it very well. It wasn't too supernatural, like the 'magic' part didn't override the mystery and the characters like I've seen in other stories. It still had that Sherlock feel. I immensely enjoyed this story.

(p.s. you keep putting in the word excepted where you meant to say expected, just a little thing, not enough to put me off the story at all)

Lol, great story. I hope you will continue to write many more Sherlock stories, you certainly have a talent for it.

That was GREAT LOVED the idea behind this...Cause yes John is just that AWESOME! LOL

THANKS:"D

Adorable fic! I love it!

Loved it! Thanks a lot for taking the time to write it :) if I had to criticise, I'd want more detail, but to be honest it isn't strictly necessary. Cheers!

Great story, very interesting and well written. I hope you write more in this universe.

he almost needs the visions to keep Sherlock safe!