Legendary bruh

Honestly turning naruto into some nuts avenger or revenge driven person kills this along with adding more people from naruto in is diluting the story, I should have known better than try crossovers in naruto again. 9/10 of them suck

You talk about canon can’t be the same and all this but you didn’t even get a characters name correct this story is slowly starting to lose my interest

Skipping and repeating words are annoying btw

He would have to eliminate himself, this chapter and the last are too much, I can no longer read this.

Oh god not another one. "I must contact THAT person . . ." nobody fucking thinks that way. They don't censor their own thoughts so as to not name the subject.

you sir, are a marvelous bastard. i read your fic in one night, even tho i had work. your story is great, well written and super well thought out. if i find the name of your novel, and it is at least a little bit like this gem, i WILL read it.

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD YES, all of the things that you "teach" before chapters is a godsend, i have been reading fanfics for years, i see myself as a professional dissector of stories and the things that ruin stories the most are the things that you give lessons on how to write fanfics. its refreshing finally seeing a fellow writer who understands.

(Posting on Chapter 16 cause I already put one up on 17)

I'm still mad about this but I'm ready to leave a real review.

I think you did a great job characterizing all the Naruto characters we actually got to see. I loved your power progression for Eragon, your backstory for Naruto being there, your ability changes for Naruto. I missed Kurama a bit but that's not a flaw with your writing, just my expectations. I even like your future plot points and I love your ending. I'd love to know what happened to Oromis.

Don't stop writing. But finish next time please, cause I want to read your work

Don't mark you story complete if it's not fucking complete. How hard is this to understand? So tired of finding incomplete stories with this crap at the end.

I was pissed off enough to comment this time because your story is fire. Whatever.

This is probably one of the greatest stories I've ever read here, and I have read a lot. It has perfect character interactions, and the plot ideas were brilliant.

I find I'm sad to see it end.

This is going in my favorites list. I wish you well with your novel.

~Bnemesis

Eh? Naruto and Inheritance cycle crossover? Certainly a very interesting desicion... Have never seen something like this before, though I'd like to see where you're going to go with this.

Good story, I enjoyed it. It could have been more, as you said, but every story has it's flaws, none are perfect. That said, you did very well with this story, in my opinion. Truthfully, I would have preferred to read this story to its conclusion, but you at least gave valid points as to why you weren't writing it out. I will thank you for at least having the consideration to tell us how the story plays out, I was grateful for that as well. I understand that this is an old post, but I still wish you well with your life as it seems that you have (or had) your hands full. Thanks for writing this, I really, truthfully enjoyed all of it. Farewell!

its murtagh not murgath.

Great interaction between Naruto and his "ghosts".