wow.

Your English is just fine, and I love your "fluff". A great piece to read while listening to David Bowie's "Slip Away" from his Heathen album. (Try it)

Oh! You did the dialogue just like how they do it in French! I haven't read in it for a while. _

Pas mal, pas mal du tout! _ Ton anglais est devenu mieux avec chaque histoire que t'ecris.

Yay! It makes me smile, since I'm a huge AxI fan and a huger AxS hater... No offending, that's what I am.