| Reviews for The Beginning of the Daughter of the Sun |
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   Maymae18 chapter 5 . 8/13 Bro we get it Zuko's a boob man |
| lolyalu chapter 5 . 6/26 Why does she owe Zuko when it’s really Uncle Iroh who saved her most of the time |
| lolyalu chapter 3 . 6/25 Damn I forgot how much Zuko is an ass |
| 582Raven chapter 10 . 4/16/2019 Very interesting, I'll like finding good OC stories :) |
| smileysteph chapter 21 . 3/25/2017 Well I guess I'm reading the updated version of this story but I am honestly amazed! This was an amazing story that kept me on edge and Emiko is definitely a strong character and one whine I perso relate to. Also zuko and the other characters were well written but your plot though... I have to say I loved it! It was unique and captivating and overall interesting and no plot holes. I hate when there's plot holes or things aren't really we explained but I think you are some of the few that handled this nicely. Congratulations on writing this piece and I am most definitely checking out the next part! |
| Terra Maximus Decimus Meridius chapter 9 . 3/4/2017 Love this, very well written! |
| Lynntheripper chapter 21 . 5/28/2015 So I was going to read "Revelations of the Daughter of the Sun" and to be honest I wasn't going to read this story because you said it wasn't completely necessary; let me just say I am glad I read it any way! This story was amazing and beautifully written! You kept all of the characters from the series perfectly in character. Even while Zuko was changing I felt he was in character. Thank you so much for writing this and I look forward to reading the next part of this installment now! |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 11 . 6/15/2014 So cool! 3 |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 10 . 6/15/2014 Oh shit, she just... |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 9 . 6/15/2014 Cool chapter! |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 7 . 6/15/2014 Omg, pretty cool chapter! |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 6 . 6/15/2014 Owww, fluffy! Good chapter! |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 5 . 6/15/2014 Woah.! Good job! |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 4 . 6/14/2014 Cool chap! |
| Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 3 . 6/14/2014 Hooo... Good job! |
