Exciting and disturbing, I love it! too bad you never continued it...

Please continue. Everyone ships Alice this Alice that. I ship Vivaldi and Ace, but I'm all alone with it. Where are my other outside the box shippers!?

That was hot haha. Loved it

Oh that was hot. I love Ace-how he manages to control even Vivaldi, how he pushes her to the wall, and claims her as his. Ha, and says it's his game. Oh Vivaldi, you're so awesome and doll-like. I wouldn't mind if this continued, although it doesn't look possible now. But all I can think about is if I was in either of their positions I'd be melting /blush Thank you for such a smoldering yet dark fanfic surrounding this rarely seen pairing. Ugh and I love the fighting over dominance.

I like it hope you continue it.

Really liked the story it was very interesting

Woah O.O somehow in this pairing I keep feeling that Ace should be the submissive one since I can't picture Vivaldi being that but nonethless the story is hawt! XD An interesting perspective and I enjoyed the ending alot, it was a very VERY nice touch

I don't believe it's anywhere near the M rating, so now worries. :) This is very interesting, the need to control from Vivaldi and Ace's pyschotic-ness will result in a helter skelter relationship I'm sure. I hope you're able to update soon. :D

I would think she would fight more. :/ But lets see how the rest of it will go. _

That was awesome! Keep it up!

Normally, I'm not a huge fan of this pairing... although, I must say that I rather like this fic. You have a nice writing style. And personally, I don't think that this is M-rated material yet, so... don't worry too much about that. n_n I hope you continue.