I don't know if I really sensitive or something. But when I finish read this work. I found my cheeks wet...
Thanks for sharing this beautiful fic. I love it.

Great writing on how Zoro was feeling when he asks to take Luffy's place.

A good pov fic. I like the explanation for his motivations.

Love your take on this. Wonderfully Zoro and Oda-ish. Bravo

How in the world did you manage to turn this into a happy story?! Color me impressed.

Wow man, such depth moved my heart a thousand miles, I feel like singing right now. It's strikes directly through me, I love your analysis. And your summary is so downright poetic. :) Thank you so much.

I love the last line. I can so imagine this with Zoro.

Wow. Oh my god. This was brilliant! I love Zoro for this; you wrote this incredibly well, almst as though it was actually what he was thinking at the time :D

Out of all your OP ficlets, this one here is my absolute favorite. I really like the fact that your fics are short, but pack a punch. You use every sentence efficiently, and don't waste any space with superfluous words that do anything less than make the reader feel an onslaught of powerful emotions.

"Luffy is the dream. Luffy is the reason." THIS. I love this part so, so much.

"To die in Luffy's place, to take his captain's suffering as his own, Zoro does not call this duty. This is his privilege." Oh god, how did you manage to make me love Zoro more than I already did?

The imagery brought by the last paragraph is beautiful. What a perfect ending to the perfect fic about such a powerful moment in the story. Amazing job!

Love the line: 'Zoro's life has never been more important to him than in this exact moment'.
Sweet sweetness bro. As always, great job.

But seriously, when this happened in the manga I almost had a fit. Good thing Zoro's too much of a Big Damn Hero to die or I would have really lost it.

This is a wonderful read. Zoro's in character, and the insight into his mind is very enjoyable to read. My favorite line was "Zoro, who knows no heaven or piety, is only thinking thank god, thank god."

Thank you for writing this!

-BS

I just watched this episode again, so I had to come and find fics of it, and this one was just so perfect :3 Zoro's finest moment

Now oh wow. What a great story! Congratz, really... you pictured Zoro so great! And also his love-like loyalty to Luffy... That was so totally his character. Although I would have expected one or two “shit”’s

But as this should be a good review, there has to be some critic... A little something that botheres me... (Really, don’t freyk out, it’s just a tiny little thingie~)

You might want to rethink the timing of your stories. So far, I just read this one, I don’t know in what time you write your others... w

It’s often like this: If you write in past tense and create long sentences, it normally adds more drama to the story. If you write short sentences in the present form, it adds tension, more thrill and excitement. The story you wrote here is more like an inner monologue, which means tension is not really needed. So, as I see it, past tense could fit better here.

But that’s all. I really like it, it’s got something special~

Love,

Snoo~

It tears my heart apart to read your utterly tear-jerking OP fics. It's beautiful. Nothing else can compare.

I want to write a good review but I can't think of anything beyond: you did an awesome job with this.