Hey, just as a future reference, being that the spartan program was Navy, Chief wouldnt say Sir, yes, Sir, he would say Aye Aye, Sir.

I like it. Short n' sweet.

I love the last line, it shows that John really trusted Thel, I nearly cried, I like this game because of the characters and the plot, you just made Halo way better.

Wow, nice. You're a great writer.

Loved. Hope chapter 2 is coming out soon.

I loved this chapter. I hope you have a second chapter coming soon. The Arbitors version.