Indeed vivi was really a straw hat for she knows that there was a message behind on luffy’s tattoo..well she have faith in luffy and she said he will be the pirate king and he trusted luffy’s decision that’s y she’s fine and accepted robin when she knew she’s in the crew..that’s how big her trust and faith in luffy..I miss vivi and Carey in one piece and alabasta was for me the best arc..I ship luvi so much (luvi in one piece)...this is a nice one shot luvi :)

Huh, I had forgotten the implications of Crocodile being free for Vivi

I really loved how you made crocodile's release the biggest thing in her mind, very insightful into her character. Nice and sweet and I enjoyed it, thank you for the good read!

Hey this should be a full story if you do that I will add you to my favorite list also with crocodile in the blackbeard pirates teach might attack alabasta and with two fruits and crocodile with him only luffy could save alabasta (again)

Very nice work! It was short but still managed to get the emotions across very well! You portrayed the character very realistically as well. Well done.

This is a good oneshot. I've thought a lot about what Luffy's friends throughout the world thought about when they read what he did att Impel Down and Marineford (particularly what they thought about his heritage) and Vivi's reaction to him being (temporarily) allied with Crocodile was of course one of those. Maybe it will ease her mind if she ever learns it was an uneasy alliance (although Crocodile did save Luffy (and Ace) a couple times throughout the war and was a vital ally). Good thing for her Crocodile doesn't care about her country anymore.

Wow, that was great. I loved it. When your AN note said it was an RP sample, I was half expecting crappy first person fic, but this was way better than anything I could have expected. Good job.

Only problem I had was the use of the word "nakama," but I can see why you would use it, since half the one piece fandom is crazy about it.

Oh wow, what an original concept. I havent seen anything about Vivi's pov on the whole thing even though both Crocodile and Mr 1 had escaped. I really like how you've written her feelings out the way you did. She's not really happy but she trusts in Luffy. Nicely done.

Oh for future reference, it's been proven that the 3D2Y is on an arm band not a tattoo. Dont worry I made the same mistake in my story also before someone corrected me. )

Wow.

Just Wow.

Amazing job! An original premise, deadly in character- everything I like in a story!

Vivi's analysis of everything is just perfect and IC for her.. I never even thought to wonder what she was going through as a reaction to current events- especially Crocodile's freedom! Great job!