This was pretty good despite its age.

Pride is now bordering on stupidity. I guess it’s a double edged sword. And I’m also quite curious HOW vegeta can maintain ssj3 for so long without even training its mastery. Even goku used up a large chunk of his 24 hours just by using that form and he definitely had more experience with that form compared to this vegeta.

Regardless of those nitpicks, I believe this story is pretty good for one of your older ones. The emotions are well portrayed and so are the flashbacks.

A few plot holes here and there, but it’s alright since this is one of your oldest stories and all. The dragon balls are a neutral force, people can wish for money, Immortality and power and satisfy their greed with them as they like.

Dende removed the revival restriction when recreating the dragon balls.

I'm so sorry, before i read your little authors note i laughed. i just couldn't handle it, i laughed i'm so sorry please though i don't discourage you from making more little mistakes like that.

I love your sense of humor you have put into this chapter, especially Vegeta's thoughts of King Yenma, i also appreciated the parts when you mentioned THEM as you referred to them, i'm reading the next chapter now

Hahaha! And Bulma! Yes, Bulma's got Vegeta... :)

Hmm, weakling, eh? No wonder Sir Akira didn't make him the main character... :) Though he totally should have, in my opinion, along with Gohan.

Ah, interesting plot twist here... nice! I am so reading this now.

this was an awesome fan fiction you are great i hope you make!

this was an awesome fan fiction

yes frieza is dead

this is not short its beast

vegeta is blinded by his pride and revenge oh well

this story is good plz never stop

this was so beast hope it ends good wild vegeta