| Reviews for Revelation |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 4/2/2019 Its a good fan fiction but had too many unneeded scenes. Smellerbee and long shot didn't need an adult scene. It dragged it out too much. Also when is toph and zuko gonna visit her mother? |
 ZophToko chapter 2 . 7/11/2017 I love it. I love how sincere sokka is in the end of this chapter. I like how he warned katara as an older brother |
| zackayu chapter 9 . 9/23/2015 One more chapter and you'll be done! So finish it please |
| U.N. Owen chapter 9 . 7/13/2015 This was last updated in February...finishing it soon? |
| guest chapter 9 . 6/9/2015 Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Tonitokkian chapter 9 . 2/28/2015 What a comeback you made man the last chapter was awesome cant wait for the next one :) |
| zulfi chapter 9 . 2/28/2015 Damn it that was awesome :') too much feels |
| guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2015 I love this story. It's because of you that I got into fanfics, so please update this story and continue to write :) |
| GreenxArrow chapter 1 . 3/17/2014 what the fuck do you people not know how shitty this I mean for christs sake these are two people that are very sensitive underneath their tough exterior and have trouble expressing their emotions and showing affection plus these two people are also very self conscious so an 'I love you' would take some convincing like a why not a how and then second fucking of all saying 'I love you' to someone is a goddamn commitment not something that you say freely and you're acting like they're not real (yes I know they're not) but you have to make them sound like real fucking people that have insecurities that have trouble being themselves and don't rush into their love it's their fucking love story and this is what makes this so fucking shitty and such a fucking bullshit story |
| Koutarou Tatsumiya chapter 8 . 1/21/2014 Damn, this story is amazing. Haha, I feel like a total creep shipping Toko, but I always thought they looked good together. I've really got no huge comments, except keep up the good work! |
| WorldBrandOtaku chapter 8 . 10/28/2013 I really like what you made so far and I hope you continue, thanks! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/12/2013 Are you gonna write another chapter? I LOVE this story so much that I've read it over like 3 times already! PLEASE UPDATE! Great story! |
| TaangWeek chapter 1 . 5/5/2013 I love this |
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/4/2013 OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE I am begging you PLEASE don't give up on it. I like the idea of a baby Toph or Zuko too ny the way. Great story! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/1/2013 Are you gonna write another chapter? I really do like the idea of toph being pregnant! I hope they have a little toph or zuko soon! Can't wait till you update again! |
