Sam should own up to being the real reason dean could of died instend his let dean take the blame he tries to act like a man standing up to their dad but yet isn't man enough to tell the trutjlh his selfish!

"Thick fowl smelling saliva" a reference or typo?

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Great story! Really well written and exciting. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Pretty good. I loved it. I'm just a little disappointed that the boots situation was not resolved. Thank you for sharing.

What happened to the broken ulna?
I like this.

Oh hell, Sam you kick boots and salt fall?

Perfect.

That was fantastic! i really enjoyed reading it from start to finish. i really liked the way you characterized john in that he really did care and had some reasons for pretending like he didn't. poor dean though :-( but for some reason still love to read stories like this...i won't look to closely at why ;-) great story!

Poor Dean, loved it...

Great story! Vivid imagery! Thank you. From a Dean-girl.:)

Oh Poor -my- Dean... (TT_TT)
But at least it's a happy ending one...

I don't know what should I say right now... I just happy John didn't act mean, but feel panicked and regret... and Sam? Well... i'd glad if he really feel guilty...

I loved this story. So much. If my brain wasn't still clogged from hours of studying for midterms, I'd have more to say. But thank you for helping me stop stressing for a little while

Really quite good.

This was really awesome and really well written. Good job!