Wait...is that...Aragon? Epic :)

Well, the end. Enjoyed the story- a lot more than I expected to, given that (shock, horror), HP isn't my usual read. Looking forward to reading some of your original writing.

Oh wow! The last few chapters have been very powerful, very well written.

Ooh, those tricky elves! Living up to their reputation. Plots moving along nicely.

Very minor point in a good chapter, but I thought from the previous chapter that iron railings wouldn't work? Maybe I misunderstood.

Like the rearranged city. And the academics. A few typos. I was wondering why fighting elves with iron hadn't been mentioned sooner - thought that was common knowledge! :-) but adding the science angle to it is a neat bit of storytelling.

The pace of plot movement in the last few chapters seems faster - which does suit the shift to action / war IMHO.

Ooooh! Twists n turns. Like.

Very nicely done. Lots of threads, but it hangs together as a chapter.

When I first started reading, I was like "oh, whatever, another Marauder story to take up time while I'm sick"

O.O

This is not any other Marauder story.

Morrigan was brilliant. I absolutely loved her character and her relationships with Severus and Voldemort.

When you got into her story about Tintagel and the elves it felt like another entire world of magic and war and ELVES.

The elves scare the crap out of me.

But honestly, if you were to write a book in the world of Tintagel, I'd read it. Repeatedly.

THE ENDING. Ohhh gosh. I admit, I kind of want to kill you right now, but I'll hold off..

Thank you for writing this.

I have FINALLY finished it! I'm so sorry it's taken so long, I've been insanely busy lately and it hasn't left much opportunity for fanfiction.

And...WOW. What an ending. The battle was fantastically detailed and fast-paced but still easy to follow, the dragons were amazing and I teared up at Fothergill's death even though we barely knew him, and Frank... :(

I was worried about Remus being unable to return to human form, but I'm glad he retained his mind and that he "seemed more relaxed than he had ever been as a man" because he never did get much peace as a man, and it's nice to know he managed to get some, somehow...

Harry's middle name was very appropriate, I'm still upset about Sirius's death. :( I'm so glad Morrigan and Severus ended up together though! And aww, Harry and Neville getting to be best friends growing up...and Draco with a sister?

And then there I was thinking that they all finally had peace and (even though, for Morrigan's sake, it was slightly sad when he died) Voldemort is coming back! What an ominous ending! I wonder if things would actually be any different, if he did come back, after everything...

Great work!

-Kim

Like the device of an interlude, and sinister too!

Can't wait to see what the Elves are going to be like. Liked the last few chapters a lot, eveything's developing nicely.

nice chapter. all four sub-plots carried along. What's in store next?

I wasn't so sure about the speech. The meaning is clear enough, but it felt a bit too intellectual, and not emotive enough - particularly not to rouse a bunch of teenage boys! As a whole it read more like a Leninist tract than a call to arms. Compare with Mussolini's speeches, for example (google Mussolini speech 1940 - you;ll find both an english translation and the recording on youtube ( watch?vgaq8xmjcfpE) - there's some wordystuuf in there, but some short snappy pieces too.

Arrggh! Suddenly it's all turned really nasty. Very well done, no warning, just like there was no warning of the attack.