Reviews for Amnesia
d-kronk chapter 17 . 1/11/2014
This was a great way to tie this up. I love Penelope asking Derek what he would do if she got amnesia again and forgot about him. His immediate answer is great, but I really love his later one, I love that he wouldn't let it happen. Wonderful job, I loved this fic.
d-kronk chapter 16 . 1/11/2014
Aaah... now this is what I like, everything coming together. I'm so glad they both told each other how they felt and got all their feelings out in the open.
d-kronk chapter 15 . 1/11/2014
I really like the awkwardness between them in this chapter. And I also loved Derek trying to soothe her and telling her whatever it is she wants to talk about can wait...though I'm glad she didn't wait. Once you get the nerve to say something it's hard to wait and get that nerve back later. I love his answer for why he did it and him showing her vulnerability.
d-kronk chapter 14 . 1/11/2014
Great chapter! I really like Penelope's thoughts and then her realizing that she's the one that initiated all of their intimate moments. I'm really glad she's going to him and love her desperation to get there, just pulling up her hair and throwing on some clothes, not caring how she looks.
d-kronk chapter 13 . 1/10/2014
I really like everyone coming on to Penelope trying to get her to forgive Derek. And I'm glad that Hotch told her just how much doubt Derek had in playing along with the situation.
d-kronk chapter 12 . 1/10/2014
I'm glad Penelope went to work that Monday... I'm pretty sure I'd have called in sick if it had been me. I'm also glad that she didn't throw away the flowers, that's a positive sign.
d-kronk chapter 11 . 1/10/2014
What a heartbreaking chapter. Poor Penelope. And then on top of everything she has to deal with Kevin showing up. I'm glad she kicked him out, hopefully things get better for her soon.
d-kronk chapter 10 . 1/10/2014
What a horrible time for her to remember everything. I really like how excited she was at first to remember and then her instantly figuring out that Derek knew and what that meant. I really hope she heard some of what he was saying through the door and that he believes her.
d-kronk chapter 9 . 1/10/2014
I really like that it's Penelope that is taking charge and her surprising Derek with that act. His thoughts as he looked at her once she was naked are great. Wonderful job.
d-kronk chapter 8 . 1/10/2014
That was definitely a nice welcome back. I really like Penelope's confusion in this fic as she tries to make sense of what she remembers and what is happening. And I'm glad Derek had the presence of mind to get them to the bedroom so that their first time wasn't against the counter... although I'm pretty sure at that point Penelope wouldn't have minded. ;-)
d-kronk chapter 7 . 1/10/2014
I really enjoyed this, I'm glad they are going on more dates. And love Penelope's reaction when JJ and Emily ask if Kevin is an option. JJ and Emily's conversation when she leaves is great as well, I love them not wanting to hang out with Lynch.
d-kronk chapter 6 . 1/5/2014
That was a great date! I really like how much thought Derek put into it and going to the concert in the park was a great idea. I love his reaction when Penelope says how she is wanting the night to end... he's only going to be able to delay that so long before she figures out that something is wrong.
d-kronk chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
I like that Kevin hasn't shown up... although the constant phone calls are just as bad. And I love Derek going to Hotch for advice. Hopefully he does use this as an opportunity, and it doesn't backfire.
d-kronk chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
He is definitely in trouble. And famous last words... how long can it last, I have a feeling it's going to take longer then he's thinking.
d-kronk chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
I am really enjoying this fic. I really like Penelope throwing Derek off, her asking things a normal girlfriend would ask and him scrambling to answer without revealing the truth. The conversation about him taking care of her is great as well. And that kiss is great.
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