very nice. I like how we are shown more about what the gang must have felt when aang surpassed their bending so easily

Is this after she finally forgives him?

Ah, loved this. Wonderful, and very possible.

Very well written and insightful. I loved how you kept every single character IC...I can easily imagine this scene happening in a canon episode. :)

It seems natural Zuko and Katara would have a conversation like this. I wish it had lasted a little longer before Aang interjected so they could have bonded over training styles some more, but nice concept for a fic and an angle I haven't really seen explored yet so good job.

Lovely little moment

Good story! You wrote the characters well, and your writing style and grammar were excellent.

Hey! Very nice story! It kind of reminds me of one I wrote called "Bitter Fire", if you'd like to check it out. Good job!

A GOOD IDEA ON THIS STORY AND iTS IS A VIEW IN THE AVATAR I THINK THEY WOULD SHARE