That was nice. :)

It was UNBELIEVABLE! I was at the verge of tears when Charlie tried to commit suicide and Don saying that he loved his brother. It was so amazing. Unbelievable. Well done.

I have really enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing it :)

Aw, poor Don. Charlie seems to have recovered from the incident to the point where he can't even figure out why Don seems worried, but I think Don's going to be stuck with that memory and that fear for the rest of his life. Cinnamon.

I don't think you understand what an analogy is.

My English is very bad so I just say: very good fic!

Awesome