OOOHHH MYYYY GOOOSH This is so lovely! This is one of the cutest Finding Nemo fanfics I've ever read. I loved the sweet little interaction between Bruce and Dory. Poor guy, he can't help being a shark! It's like asking a fish not to swim. I wish he got more love as a character as did Anchor and Chum. I was slightly disappointed that they didn't make a cameo in Finding Dory but eh, what can you do? And oh god that line "if he could just behave like a normal shark he could forget that the fish had names and faces. That they had feelings, that they laughed and cried, just like him...Maybe..." That hits hard. Part of the reason I love FN is its brutal honesty of nature. Who would have thought a story about anthropomorphic fish could be so emotional?

I'm still confused as to why there aren't more (good) FanFics w/ Bruce in it. The Sharks definitely need some more popularity. :/
(BTW, is it wrong to ship Bruce/Dory? Just a little bit? ;3 I honestly see her with Bruce more than I see her w/ Marlin. IDK.)

i loved it.

That was such a sweet story. :) Poor Bruce. He is trying so hard to not eat fish. Thank Goodness he has wonderful friends such as Dory, Marlin, Anchor, and Chum to support him all the way. Speaking of Chum and Anchor, you should defiantly write a story about them too. :) I feel they are kind of left out in other Finding Nemo stories.

Aww... A great story. I loved it. 3

AWWWW! That was so sweet!

Aww, what a great story! I LOVED this, it was so awesome! :)) So sweet, almost made me tear up. Wonderful job here! So loved this awesome fic! You wrote the characters so spot-on I could really picture the scene. Great job!

"What's the matter," she teased, "catfish got your tongue?"

LOL

His son FABIO? Nemo! BTW, I think she really said that in the film.

aw! I loved this one!

Brilliant! I loved it! Keep Writing! You're really good at it! _

Yay, so cute) I think you done good job. Dory and Bruce in character, and situation is totally believeable)

yay finally another story with Bruce:D Good job, the characters were very, well..in character (hehe). We really need more fics about the sharks. they don't get enough credit. i remember someone started to write a story that was Chum centered but then i guess she deleted it. That was a shame cuz it was off to a good start. (That and the oc she had was a mako shark from Texas! It was awsome:D) Do you think you could do a fic Chum centered? I would really love that:D

How cute! And there's something there that's surprisingly profound.

Omg, this is such a wonderful story. D

I'm so glad you shared this with us - it's been a long time since I've read a good Finding Nemo fic involving Bruce. A lot of them are just too wacky - but this one was priceless. _

Loved the story to the picture by Sharkluvr's (love her art)it was a wonderful story and I loved it!

great job your a wonderful writer! :3