Very disprespectful...i cant believe they would disrespect his parents like that in their own home...if they didnt look like little whores before they sure do now.

She is selfish and all i hear from her is me me me...his family needs him but to her she is more important...has she ever thought of becoming amish for him?

Geez she really comes off as pathetic...doesnt she worry that he will resent her later on in life?

I LOVE YOUR STORY again I LOVE YOUR STORY
The premise, the plot, the love and understanding, the kicking a $ of LOVE enemies, ALL OF IT.
THANK YOU
A.

Ummmm nowhere in there did he say show me. He said he wanted to know but I never saw show me. It's really crappy when people give up their parents. She needs to comfort Edward not the other way around. Plus umm they aren't acting that innocent in his parents home.

Great story! I really enjoyed it.

Cute story so far, I'm excited to see what happens next.

Lovely story

This story was really awesome. Thank you.

Thanks for writing and especially for coming back to finish. It's a cute story and I look forward to reading how their lives work out.

great chapter

Enjoyed the first chapter :)

Loved it... Just saw your story today but if it finish you should change it from in progress to completed... Off to read the sequel now

Love love love

Yayayay! I'm so glad you're deciding to do a sequel! I just found this story the other day and was insanely hooked