The first and some chapters I like but the last kinda out of charcater since how can Elli forgive Edward when he doesn't even prrove himself forgiven. I think the story is too fast that she just forgive him easily knowing that her mother put through hell giving birth to them or else trust someome you never met before and left your mom.

INteresting

Hey, I know its been a while but I love this story. I'm looking for part 2 of this story hope to find it. any way jumping to conclusion thank you for writing the story I enjoyed it, Again thanks.

BYIE

Can I have this story

Are you still writing this 'cause it hasn't been updated in a while ... If not please start too I was really enjoying it and if you are great thx please update soon !

precious, the others will come around in time n forgive and they'll all be on huge happy family, suprised the kids didn't have children,lol

love this story so far! hoping to read more!

excellent. cannot wait for more.

Aww, sweet. Good for Ellie; someone had to break the ice. Do hope she pins her Father down and gets him to explain his actions and just what the Cullens have been doing all these years.

Looking forward to part 2.

First, sorry to hear about the depression - but, you are not the only one and won't be the last. As long as the right dose of medication is prescribed, and you take it faithfully, you'll be alright. Plus, you are writing good stories, so all it not lost.

Now I just can't believe Edward sat there and never said a word! Just like a bump on a log - the dolt. Granted, he'd be shocked, but still - not eve an attempt to speak.

Hope he returns to speak with her privately. On to the next chapter. Can't wait!

aww! can't wait for more. i hope that nessie becomes the daddy's girl she wants soon. as for mason...hope he don't kill edward...

Please Continue soon

Awwwwww! That was so cute. I can't wait to read more.

Great job :)

love it please update soon