Very cute! You should write more stories, this was great!

Aw, that was very sweet. I loved the description of Simon's eyes, and how you said that he was the center of Ralph's world. Not many words past between them, but all the emotion was there. Great job!

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WOW.

So. Frickin'. CUTE! :D

Aww, this is really sweet!

FINALLY! *Hugs you* THANK God we finally have more RalphXSimon fanfics! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I WANT RALPHXSIMON! Please! And this one was so cute! And I love it how it is about the island as well! Please, write more fics about this! Maybe how Simon and Ralph got together?

That was beautifully written! Just beautiful. The autumnal imagery was just perfect here, everything you drew attention to was warm and golden, just like autumn.

I particularly thought that the first paragraph was the Pinnacle of Perfection. So...vivid.

And I could see all of it happening in my mind's eye, and it was gorgeous. The colours and the sounds (alright, yes, now I sound like I'm mad, I admit.)

Anyway, I really liked this. Like, really a lot.

Brilliantly well done! )

Awooo this almost made me want to go back and write Ralph/Simon. Almost. I love Jack/Simon too damn much.

But I love the autumn imagery, especially since it's in season.