Awsome I loved it but I think you should add mor to explian more about wht happens to Jade and Beck

yay i loved it. did you actually write the story you alluded to at the end about why Beck did it? I'd love to read it

I am very confused. What did Jade do to Tori? And what plan was Beck going to do?

wow.. very nice

You're moving too fast. What did Jade do to Tori, what plan didn't Beck go along with? Is this in reference to another story, or to the show? If it's to another story, why not make a second chapter to that?

On top of that... Jade freaking out? Doesn't really have an impact when you write less than 500 words. Elaborate more. Again, the pace is too high to take the events serious.

And I think, once again, that you're exaggerating the depth of their relationship. This isn't Twilight, man...

This is one of the best fan fic!

Stop polluting the fandom with your bad writing.

Poor Jade.

Cute.