Wow, this was really good. I'd have to say that my #1 complaint about lemons on this site is how undetailed they are Really, the details are what make the lemon sexy, and if you don't have enough, or any at all, it just isn't very good.

You don't have that problem, though, and if this is your first lemon I can't wait to see what you do in the future ;D

Very nice...love it! Great story, well written and beautiful.

I don't review lemons while logged in, so you'll have to deal with the anonymous review; sorry.

I don't understand how this only has one review. It's well-written (seriously), and it's really quite cute, even with the lemon. I quite like it, actually! Keep up the good work!

I want a mango now, love the fic, you did good on lemon.