I really like this, I can actually see David doing this. I think you captured his character marvelously. I think this would actually be a wonderful story, but it also is a wonderful one-shot with the cliffhanger it makes you wonder what becomes of Aimee.

Please write more, it was great :)

Good job keep it up, I really liked it :)

Good job keep it up, I really liked it :)

Whoah this was amazing! You're an incredible writer. I myself have trouble capturing David's character and you did it perfectly! Write more!

this was just... amazing! I'm so glad I read it!

Hell, this was amazing. You had David's character spot-on; I actually found him quite sexy, the way you write him ha. I wish you would continue with this, you are great at writing, so please don't ever doubt yourself.

:)

Wow. Why have you never bothered to write before, because this is brilliant :D

You have David spot on, possessive, controlling, determined. You have a talent for making people feel how the characters are, I felt what Aimee was feeling...

I demand you write a story. Lol