Reviews for I Remember a Scene on the Beach
CourtyardGarden chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Gosh, I'd like to say, I hate it, but I can't. I'd like to say, I love it, but I can't either. I can understand both parties, have been there many times myself. This story has hit home. Sad, so very sad.
darkeyed1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Jesus H... well, I guess I'm not alone in that I cried at about 3/4 of the way till the end... They're not supposed to end up like that. My friend won't read death fics and no offense but I might not anymore either. This is beautifully written , highly emotional and sooo effing SAD! But that's the point here, right? So I give you an AA I wouldn't discourage anyone from reading this , but have your hanky handy!
Sue chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
I know you posted this story awhile ago, but to be honest, I have avoided reading it until now because I usually avoid death-fics. But, your wonderful storytelling on Warheads finally convinced me to give it a try. I'm glad I did, even though it brought tears to my eyes. It's poignantly written, and perfectly describes the helplessness someone feels when a loved-one suffers from a self-destructive behavior. You have a way of describing emotions in your writing that astounds me in its clarity. You said you have a personal affliction to it, and for that I'm sorry to hear, but thanks for sharing it with us.
Demise Angel chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Beautiful sentences. Truly saddening. I'm def cried. And you know I love Heero...WHY! why god why!

But really it was good and a feeling I knew once. I hate sickness...
CircleKV12 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Oh my goodness that was horrible. There a tears in my eyes. You should obviously label that tragedy not drama. It was a good story and well written even though super depressing. I have read fiction books about eating disorders or seen movies about but those always seem to have an ending with the person with the disorder realizing they need help. They rarely contain death and if they do it is more like my friend died from it and now I will get back. I have never read a story about an eating disorder that has affected me this deeply. I mean it seems like there is no hope or happy ending to this. I guess it just put eating disorders more in perspective for me. Great story. Can't wait for you to update Warheads.
x1-TaKeN-oVeR chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Can I just say that it has been a LONG time since I've read fiction, let alone great, well written fiction. This is was.. amazing! I love how you repeated, "I remember a scene on the beach". I really can't stop saying how amazing this story was and the flow was perfect. Ahh, I just loved it!
JunKiyomi chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
This was very depressing...but I liked it a lot :)
Nikki chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
That was beautiful. Sad and beautiful.