Interesting...
It doesn't really sound right to say 'interesting...' to that actually.
This story makes me want to cry. Since I think that's what it's supposed to do then good job!
Thanks for sharing and God bless!

This is amazingly beautiful. I like how the beginning and ending are like a poem. You captured a very emotional but often overlooked part of the story. And I'm glad you included the happy ending as well. Excellent job.

This was so beautifully said. I've always loved poetry, but I could never write it. :( Over all it was beautiful! BRAVO!

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Touching and worth reading repeatedly.

I absolutely love this! It is well written, and the tone and imagery leave nothing to be desired. Well done!