| Reviews for The Anomaly |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2019 You don't understand clan dialogue using contractions, its the only thing making me say screw reading this |
 2Xenos chapter 4 . 12/1/2017 It is a real pity and very sad that it seems that this will never be continued / updated. I hope that only had would be a writer' block and his/her be ok. |
| GoldenGryphon chapter 4 . 4/7/2017 Cool story. The culture chock on both sides would be immense. I can only imagine that would be the reason you decided to end the story where you did. Love the mix of worlds. And the fact that in your Multiverse, magic doesn't cause tech to fail. Very nice. Thank you for sharing. It was a nice break from the regular annoying stuff that fills HP fanfic. Best thoughts. |
| Ghost of Meat chapter 4 . 6/6/2015 Why did you stop this? This is one of two crossovers of this kind and the only one that is good. Better than most crossovers i've read regardless of the subjects of the cross. |
| killroy225 chapter 4 . 5/30/2015 It's sad to see such a promising story die, but such is life...if you ever update it'd be AMAZING! |
| gearworks of ff chapter 4 . 4/6/2015 very smooth storyline, no noticed spelling errors good flow on clan material without resorting to the hard to understand terms of the clans |
| Olaf74 chapter 3 . 6/15/2014 Oh my dearness ;) |
| MWRANDOM chapter 4 . 4/6/2014 Excellent work! The idea of a magic using clan (once they integrate Harry's genes and centuries down the line) is both intriguing and in some ways terrifying. Not 100% sure about the usefulness of having a mechwarrior in the 20th century as they haven't yet built the tools needed to build the tools required to create a Mech, although I suppose a magical equivalent is possible. Though as he's a warrior and not an engineer that would appear to be a moot point anyway. Still I really like what you have done so far and hope that one day you will continue this. |
| cko2 chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 To bad this seems to be dead. Very cool idea and the reactions of a full grown harry that is combat trained with one hell ofva body gaurd is really going to shake things up in the wizard world. I can see snape doing his normal potter thing and finding himself face down on the floor with a gun or blade to his head. Dumble door reactions are going to fun with harry being this old. Love the story and reactions so far. |
| DrunkenGrognard chapter 4 . 4/15/2013 OKay, this is amusing as hell and I'm rather looking forward to seeing it continue. Hope to see updates soon! |
| TxA-GunFighter chapter 4 . 3/15/2013 Very good chapter. Really hope you finish this story. It is too good to let it die. gunny |
| TxA-GunFighter chapter 3 . 3/14/2013 Interesting chapter. gunny |
| TxA-GunFighter chapter 2 . 3/13/2013 Good chapter. gunny |
| TxA-GunFighter chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 Very good start. gunny |
| Olaf74 chapter 4 . 11/15/2012 Just one Word "FANTASTIC!" I am an BattleTech-Fanatic :) |
