Reviews for Expansion
laira chapter 3 . 4/21/2019
hey .I love this story please please pleeeeeeaaas CONTINUE ..I would love to read it ..c'mon man ...u can do it
cantgetuptoolazytodoso chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
hope you can find the time and inspiration to continue this
DazzlingBunnyPrincess0910 chapter 3 . 12/16/2017
I love this story and please continue it soon
Leirizt chapter 3 . 11/29/2017
please update,,,, I really like your story
EmeraldBlossom17 chapter 3 . 5/14/2017
Please Update
blhartma chapter 2 . 9/26/2016
I will literally send you money to continue this! Please please please! Your writing is wonderful and the plot line is captivating! I love this story! Please keep going!
blhartma chapter 3 . 1/9/2016
Hi! I'm such a huge fan of this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT!
I'm not kidding I could see this getting published and made into a movie, it's so well written and the story line is FANTASTIC!
ThisIsAwesome chapter 3 . 4/25/2015
Hi! Your story's awesomee! It's so kawaii and full of love & happiness, just what the Uchiha family would look like to me. Good job! ( o)/ I hope you would update soon! I'm really looking forward to it! o( w )o
Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2014
aren't you going to update?
fluffy1hothanyoulover chapter 3 . 11/15/2014
more please! lol
BlueBird1306 chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
woah, im kind of sad to see the last update was in december 2012...because i really love sequels and this ones very good.
maybe you can tell me if you ever plan on continuing this one?
Plixosm chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
Let's just say that I am a bookworm and I kindasortofmaybe finished the prequel and the sequel which is this in a day. Yeah. It's so cute! There are a bit of weird sentences here and there but it's really great and refreshing.
Jeufufns chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Hey there quite the nice chapter you got there.

You said you wanted the people reading to look out for mistakes. I could only find two :) Petty good for a text this huge.

I actually came for an expansion other than this or maybe it comes in the next chapters I don't know but at least it wasn't here. Nice job on characterising and imagining though.

Hope the next chapters will be just as good cuz I'm readin all'a dem.
xFlipJamsx chapter 3 . 2/18/2014
please update the story !
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19/2014
the strong children thing only applies to uzumaki's not uchiha, the uchiha have powerful eye and the powerful parents aspect would only make their children have an earlier chances of awakening the sharingan.
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