Let's put it this way, even with Grammarly to help with spelling, grammar, and sometimes the better word for the sentence it's still not perfect! It'll offer up words that make no sense in that sentence. So you misspell a word or forget a comma here or there, big deal! Trust me when I say I've read much, much worse! When you have to deconstruct a sentence or entire paragraphs and rebuild them to make any kind of sense, then you'll know how bad it can get! Fortunately, that story was totally edited and corrected so now is easy to read.

Very cute and well done, was a wonderful read. Thank you for writing.

A few week spots (nobody correcting students using 'mudblood' till Harry makes an issue of it, Poppy allowing an obviously abused & neglected Harry to be untreated 'just because') and borderline crack-fic moments (evil!Dumbles would toss an Imperio or have Snape potion Harry into submission fairly quickly).
Overall it was funny, cute and an overall lovely read.
Thanks!

Why aren't they just buying the higher year books and learning what they can do and then leave hogwarts?

I liked the personality of this Harry, the one in the book did not perish completely coherently (Ron was always a Malfoy with some differences)
Kira

There’s also the fact that regardless of Harry being in the right when it comes to the staff’s inactivity, he was still assaulting people. Aggravated or not, assault is a crime punishable by law and, I would think by disciplinary action in schools. Them letting him off is no better than them letting bullies off.

I don’t particularly like this writing style. It’s like you’re trying to be poetic or something to that affect, but it’s not working. He’s supposedly independent and strongly against bullying, but he does nothing about Ron or the Weasley twins (two guesses why), does nothing about Severus beyond mentioning that he’s also a bully and only knows how to respond violently to verbal abuse, at least when it comes to Draco. Then there’s the sheer lack of reaction by the students and staff until several weeks after he started to regularly beat up Draco (they had to have heard about it happening before then). Lastly, I don’t know if this was you intentionally changing the canon coursework but Care of Magical Creatures is a class they start in third year.. not first.

It’s an interesting concept and it could make for a very nice story, but you haven’t handled it well.

Love this. Going to read part 2 next.

Continue and update harry gareth more friends and learn wandless magic(wands are used to controll maged broken wandno magic) by time harry build by runes wards around hermione house be creative vith runes and create sotring and recsclation station.

Let's put it this way, I have enough problems just reading English that I don't need to correct someone elses. I tend to miss words and need to go back a word or two to have the sentence make sense. As for spelling, Oh GOD, please don't ask! I enjoyed this it showed a whole new Harry to me. Every other Harry is a wimp. He does everything the old fraud running the school wants. Regardless of whether or not it's in his best interest. This Harry is no one's doormat!

I know this is probably a long shot but I really enjoy this fic. The plot is amazing and it’s well written

Harry's obsession with Hermoine is... unsettling. And comes of as a bit creepy.

Great story

I LOVED THIS STORY! I would also love to read any sequals to this story you may produce. Thank you for giving me this amazing story to read and finish.
Love,
TheWolfChild

Great story
Though I believe Dumbledore should’ve been obliviated back too his childhood