I saw a cat get hit by eight cars once.

It lived another two years, and avoided roads the entire time. Then it chased a mouse onto the highway not one mile from the original place it got run over.

It was a stupid cat I think. Or maybe it was fate that all nine lives were claimed by cars.

That said... can you please update, and if so... can we have Sasuke resurrected just soon enough for Naruto to have killed Itachi and be told about the Elders. I want to see what happens when that sort of bullshit goes down.

sad.

Pretty good. The wording could be better but its not bad...someone has a highschool education eh? Heh.

Interesting premise...might be good if you can keep it pretty realistic.

cant wait for UPDATE ! :D

those two are fighting like an old married couple

Cool

This is a good idea for a story, looking forward to finding out how things turn out.

interesting story, sasuke dying is rare but even more rare is the fact neither sakura or naruto ended up gaining a transplanted sharingan. I like that sakura and naruto are becoming closer and growing up now as well. please have naruto discover the secret of kage bushin, or have kakashi tell him. Naruto is planing to fight itachi and itachi is after him, so naruto needs to be a lost stronger or when they finally meet naruto will lose as bad as sasuke in the anime and be captured. update soon.

Great chapter, keep it up!

Naruto said and Mai looked over at him.

Just one spelling mistake.

So are Naruto and Sakura a lot closer in this then? Even if not romance then like siblings?

Naruto is pretty badass at the moment, will you be doing it like canon where the villagers come around to him slowly? Like since Sasuke died, that negates the effect Wave had on them but his victories in the Chunin Exam and the invasion and Tsunade altering a lot of opinions?

Nah, having another Uchiha alive always ruins the whole "Last Uchiha" Sasuke had going for him, even if it was kept secret.

Excellent story. I greatly enjoyed reading it.

This chapter is great, when will naruto show his bloodline.

i like it... its a new taste of blod in the waters. please update wheneer possible, i for one, wil be eagerly awaiting your chapters.

Please update soon! I want to see what happens next!