Reviews for The Xmen Present: Mulan
rbear1231 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
u did not do the trick with the fan during the anna/ victor fight its one of the best scenes in the movie...plus...you did not strap a ton of fire works to the dragon with a 'LITE ME'

I am shocked pyro did not jump up and kiss you when he fried mystique 9for record i thought up a very perverse alternate scene that eric would hate.)

all in all this was one of your top 3
Halloween Haunt chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Full of crack ups. I'm laughing out loud at some of this stuff. Good job. At first I was a little annoyed with it switching back and forth but then it became pretty funny knowing the characters thoughts. Overall it was a great job. I also love your GeekandBeauty story
Raven34link chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
LOL "You are such a bastard," Kitty said. i didn't know Kitty knew how to curse

"The greatest gift and honour, is having you for a daughter." and everything her grandma said were always my favourite lines from this movie
The Fae Demon chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
i think you should do a sequel to that and do mulan 2 it would be so funny

keep on going the stories are great

BEST WISHES

lexia16
ChereBelleRogue chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Hey, what if you did Pocahontas? I think that would be interesting... :D
shadowcatbrat918 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
One of your best stories so far, really hilarious :)
screaming internally chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Hi Chellerbelle. I've always LOVED your stories with a passion, and I was wondering . . . . since you've done the first Mulan, perhaps you could do the Disney sequal. If you want to, of course. Always a fan, Ipod Addicted. Peace Out, dude.
Twylyte chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Yay! This is an awesome one. Very good, though the OOC dialogue seems to be just as prominent as the actual story.

Still good though.

-Twy
QwertyX2012 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
hello I just wanted to say that I read a lot of your stories and sent you a request to help me set up a ROMY community you got the first invite I like how you write your movie-verse and your parody's so I figured you'd have good enough taste to pick out stories with plot please accept I'm fairly new to community's and could use all the help I can get

P.S.I also took a look at your profile to be sure ewe had similar enough taste I like how you can be funny and serious with things and how we seem to read similar things as is thank you for considering I could really use the help XP

P.S.S holy crap I sound desperate
Tempest S chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
What no commentary from Charles or Magneto? No pouting from Sabertooth for his loss to Rogue? Not even a roar or a swipe of his clothes?
ChrissyKP chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Bwahahaha! That was awesome. I love Mulan - girl power FTW. I always want to jump into the movie and strangle Chi-Fu with his stupid mustache.

Tabby is awesome as Grandma Fa. That's totally how Tabby would be as a little old lady.

And yay, an appearance by Paul! I love Paul. Such a minor character, but he's fun.
TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
I'm surprised Remy didn't make a comment about everyone mistaking Rogue for a boy. I love Pyro as Mushu and Wanda as Crikey. They're the best characters from the movie!

As usual awesome, but they're were some spots where you put Ping.
Thomas Linquist chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
I never did get to see the whole of Mulan. Now I don't have to! he he

I loved the little one-liner jokes. They really make a story.
Sugahroc57 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Hahahahaha! This was just hilarious! I loved Pyro as the dragon, he was the best- sorry Romy! But he fit the bill to well!

Loved the fic! It took six months but it was all well worth it!

Oh, I know it's not a Disney movie but I've been wanting to see an Evo version of the Breakfast Club! Such a classic movie been watching it like crazy lately and it just made think of Evo and Chellerbelle. So just a suggestion and a request, think about it!

~Ru
blackberryhunttress chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
All right since you reviewed my last update as you went along I'm gonna do that too so I can remember everything I want to say.

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Ray, yeah, there was no hope for ya, sorry buddy.

JEAN-LUC IS A GENERAL? Eesh. Though, an army of thieves is kinda appealing... Hmmm, ya're giving me ideas...

Toad's the advicer? I wouldn't take advice from Toad. Now we know why the dynasty ended.

Magneto's being honorable. -Yeah, awkward moment.

... Heh, I can't resist: Tabby's getting lucky! *snicker*

Poor, Wands... Remy! You are not allowed to go there! Johnny will get ya for that...besides, weren't you chasing after Toad for what he did in Rumplestilsken? Why would you then want him to GET Wanda? It'd be more torture if Johnny got her.

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POWERS! Yes, total score!...

Oh, good gosh, Kitty's a matchmaker? I'm surprised they didn't make her do that in Evo, it suits her character.

...Hmm, something tells me Remy still wouldn't mind meeting up with an Amazon if her name was Rogue...

I agree, powers are making this very interesting. Mulan would have kicked some serious Hun butt if she'd had Roguey's powers.

Aww, points to Kurt! You rock Blue-Fuzzy-Dude! Talk about a good brother.

Storm's a player? Who knew...

Why should women be the ones to hold their tongues when the one criticizing them can't keep his in his mouth if a fly goes by? *Shoots glare at Toad.*

Alright, Hank's a guardian ancestor spirit. That rocks. But Pyro as a dragon? That, my friend, is epic!

Since when does Lance care about traditional values? Heh, Sam knows aboutfarms huh? And Amara! Don't worry Pyro, you HAVE to burn something. I think it's in a contract somewhere.

Heh, now Wanda is getting lucky.

Who the heck is Paul? Oh, well now I know.

Scott is Bad-! That is scary!...

Ha! See through the armor! Remy that was payback for the Toad/Wanda thing.

She has to trust Pyro? * groans* She's doomed!

Ooh! Bad mental images, I'll never look at Logan the same way again! Oh no, now Mario's ruined for me too!

Yay! Bo staff training and Logan get's a taste of his own medicine! Justice!

Aww, of course, Roguey isn't worthless! She rocks!

Alright I've been resisting the whole story, but i can't help it. This whole story means that Remy was attracted to a man! I just couldn't get away withougt saying that!

Oooh, Pyro Don't chomp on anyone's butt, that's unsanitary!

Kitty said Bastard! But I agree! Yay, I"m liking the little spat between KItty and Sabertooth!

Ooh there's some family tension there!

Aww Lance didn't get in one the avalanche, that's sad!

Wanda doesn't know how to cry? That would explain the repressed emotional issues...

*Snort* Freak shows.

Hey you left out Mushu's Batman impersonation. And his 'Let's go kick some hunny buns' line! Awww!

Magneto's giving romantic advice. *shudders*

They really can't keep their hands off of eachother can they? But overall, I love it, just like i love all your other rewritten fairytales! AWesome!

-Peace, Blackberry. P.S. Sorry for the lonnng review!
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