This is an interesting story. It’s unfortunate that you have abandoned it.

This concept is such a brilliant one, and you've written it so well! Please, please, please update!

More soon please

would more badgering help reignite the muse on this one?

please continue this story

I like this a lot, I hope you haven't abandoned it. I know RL has a tendency to get in the way but you have a very good start here.

I know it’s been awhile... but please update! Looking forward to seeing how this lovely story resolves

i should have been expecting the potter comment, shouldn't i have?
you know, i can't say i agree with your punctuation choices, but i'm rather interested in the story itself - the dynamic between everyone would have been interesting to see played out. it's a shame you're no longer continuing with it. congrats on how far you got, though! and on your probable graduation from uni! hope life's treating you fairly. maybe one day you'll get back into this

i really appreciate that you decided to make Alliana plain, just a normal kid, in her appearance. it's rather rad, in my opinion, to see someone decide to have their child be anything less than a striking beauty like she has been in the few other snamione fics i've read dealing with their progeny. good on you, my guy

This story is fantasic! I truly love it.

i know it's been years since you updated... but hopefully someday you'll still continue to write this.

I enjoyed reading your fic. it's so angsty and I just loved it!

You can’t stop! This is so good!

I’m not crying, you’re crying :,(

Please update x

This is good! When you continue I will be waiting.