Nice story

But I have to say, that it felt rather undeserved. Since this is one of your first DragonFable fics that I've read, maybe missing something but I felt there should have been more of a fall out over his murdering a village, seemed like a moral event horison to me.

good ending, that 1st chapter was really...dark

Without a doubt the best story you've written yet; its also nice to see a story completely centered on Jake.