Please continue this story please. I would like to know where it goes.

Can you extend please?

kick ass;mop mans gonna get a harley;

please keep it up

This is great! Hope to read more.

Wow, loved this piece. Crane acting as a conniving man out for affection does so well under these circumstances. :) Great work. I look forward to more.

Awe Crane was staying to make himself a harley...*giggles*

This is awesome. I'd love to see it continued. Katrina is awesome! Crane is also well characterised and I can't wait to see if he has any devious plans hidden up is sleeve.

Your writing truly engages the reader. I hope you continue!