I really like this story. Cloud really is like a mother.
I just don't like that that man got off so easily. But at least they are back together and happy again.

the man should not have gotten off like that. That was the only thing I found wrong with your story. Anyone who harms children, for any reason, should be punished.

Slaves is an apt term.

I still like this just as much as when I first read it!

I accept your bad puns in exchange for the awesome writing 3

I like my ukes Bamf!

this is so good, almost as good as your story fire
i am a huge fan of your writings
you are a very wonderful author and i am a huge fan
yuki

I have re read this so many times its unreal, thank u for writing this LOTS of LOVE to YOU oh and my name is "Shadow's Life Spand''. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) I love this

Soooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!

This was one of the most well written and beautiful stories I have ever read. Thank you for writing it, I enjoyed reading it. :D

Spice and wolf opening. Nice. Btw, I absoloutly love this fic! I LOVE IT TO DEATH! It is a truly wonderfull story!

i really enjoyed this. it reminded me of blood and chocolate a little bit. what with them being loup garou and not your standard werewolves. very nice :)

One of the best fics I've ever read. Well, this is my first fic. Great job, it felt like a movie, I want to read more! Is the sequel even out? Is "Fire" a good one? Maybe I should check you stories out. But great fic! 5/5! _

I really liked this! Really really! I love your work! Please continue to write! I think I'll read just about anything you write ]

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