Can you write more Ted/Reagan? They're one of my favorite pairings for th 39 Clues! Great job, original idea!

Nice fluff.

I liked it.

Personally, I'm not a HUGE fan of Ted/Reagan, but I DO have a fondness for unusual pairings (as I'm sure you know already), so this was a breath of fresh air from everything else in the archive.

The characters were fairly IC, I think; my one point of CC is that the piece didn't flow as well as I think it could've.

All in all, well done. :)

you know, i like this story. there's actually a pairing that's original and i like.

Awww. . .it's nice to see the more humane side of the Cahills, I felt like I was their, I feel for them-this is now a couple I am sure to follow, great job! I can't wait to see some of your other written works!

Wow it was really good! I liked Holt/Starling ships and I'm glad someone wrote about it. It was written really well too. I hope you'll do more!

You did have a few grammar mistake type things that I would have changed- a comma here, deleting a word there- but not much. For the most part, this was grammar mistake free. Mostly.

However, it more of what happened that seemed to be wrong. Everyone that was tied to the rocks were on camera, right? The second one of them would untie themselves, Isabel would blow them all up. Not all of what happened in this could have happened while Isabel was distracted in the Gauntlet. She would have noticed.

Also, when was Reagan wearing a pink track suit? Maybe I forgot or something, but... Eh.

On another note, no one was aware of Ted and Ned being disabled- well, they didn't know specifically what was wrong with them. Remember when Alistair was realizing how well Ned and Ted covered for each other? Only Isabel figured it out, and then she told everyone in the Gauntlet, so Reagan couldn't have known until Ted said "I can't see to draw the diagrams..."

Those were the major plot points that ruined the whole thing, but I'll give you credit for coming up with a new ship that really seems a bit appealing, actually. So it wasn't as if this was a complete failure... Although "Hammy! Hammy!" was very unlike the Holts. O_o

That's awesome!

8-)

that was a nice fanfic. i really enjoy the pairing. i wish it had more. that would be nice.

This is good :)

I like the way you portrayed this scene. It's original and I love the way you brought out something that doesn't seem so important and make it... something special.

Well, I don't really think that Eisenhower would be all "Dad, sir", since he kind of changed as the books progressed. But still.

Good job :)

-123fizzi