You did membrane well, loved this...would've liked it better if everything got ripped off in the bush. But still loved it regardless.

1: You did okay writing Membrane.

2: Bill was even more stupid in this story.

3: You don't need to write a new chapter. It's good enough as it is.

XD there's no way you could offend me with this! i have to thank you for not just making up a name for the Death God, too. i'm impressed that you even knew his name.

i see a bit of irony in Gaz's hate of the costume. her pajamas are pink footie pajamas that make her look like a chibi with fluffy whit angel wings, and yet she loathes a fairy costume!

it's adorable torture! very nice.

Aaah... Nothing better than seeing Gaz having a terrible night, specially when it's so good written that seems an actual episode *-*

And I found your Membrane impersonation quite well!

I thought you did an excellent job in portraying Membrane well...and Bill well too, BTW. The whole thing really had a very "IZ" feel to it whilst keeping your own style intact. Very nicely done. ;)

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

Heh heh heh I liked how you wrote this! Gaz got the good and bad stuff from Halloween Night and I loved that Prof. Membrane in a sense gave Gaz the punishment of her young life.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.