LOL! I loved this, it was hilarious! Thank you for putting this smile on my face, and I wish you the best of luck on your writing. :)

I think you got Wes dead on, I absolutely loved this story. To bad we don't have more Pokemon Colosseum stories out there. Anyway, it was fun. Though in your author note you said that AU stands for Author Universe. It doesn't, it stands for Alternate Universe. Though in some ways its sort of the same thing. Anyway loved the story, you really hit Wes on the head with that Portral, I mean did you see the smirk/grin he got when he stole the Snag Machine?

Lol

This was nice. You started off by building some suspense. However, the story remains inconclusive which makes me sad.
Anyways, good job :)

HAHAHA! I CAN TOTALLY SEE WES SAYING SOMETHING LIKE THAT UPON FINDING OUT THAT THERE'S A PRICE ON HIS HEAD!

I UNDERSTAND YOU WROTE THIS TWO YEARS AGO BUT I AM JUST READING IT NOW...SHORT AND AWESOME, I LOVE IT!

This was awesome! And I can see Wes saying this xD

lol that was a great oneshot. it made me smile. and ur perty good at realisticly describing things.

O.O Wow Wes, you could be as arrogant as Drew! I agree with Rui, it would be hard to understand Wes. Great story!

Short sweet but funny and TOTALLY RANDOM. Love it.

YES. The entire time I was thinking, what could he have possibly said? BUT YES. That was hilarious. xDD I LOVE it.

Haha, hilarious! I loved it; what he said was so unbelievable! I also felt like you did well with keeping Rui in character, and Wes :) I only saw one little error as I was reading through; when Rui was saying how women would throw themselves at Wes, it should probably be plural women, and not singular woman. But that was all, so snaps to you!

I love it, especially Rui's observations of the quiet Wes. I can imagine Wes making an unexpected remark like that about his wanted poster; he seemed to enjoy blowing up the Snagem hideout in the game. But the way he said it made me laugh. XD

As for mistakes, you made a typo at the beginning. "Lucky, she didn't have too." 'Too' should be 'to'.

Also, near the end, there should be a comma right before Wes continues talking. So it should be: "...assumed he was trying to get, "I look...""

Again, I enjoyed this short one-shot; it's cute and well-written. Good job!

lol! i love it! but you made a good choice of using Wes and Rui over May and Drew. Wes and Rui fit better than drew and may for this story!

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This brought a smile to my face! :)