I loved these two in this fic. Bittersweet but with humor, just how I like. Thankyou for sharing

I'd love to read more of it XD

Oh that was super adorable. I love sarcastic Royai!

Absolutely love this fic! Well written and a perfect reflection of them. Thank you!

I remember how Arakawa-sensei said her self, once in an interview or some other that they don't get married so long as the whole commander-subordinate dynamic exists between them. Ahh, military regulations... why u no make royai cannon?

I think the dialogue was just fine, actually, and quite Roy and Riza-like. I really enjoyed this quiet, honest moment between them, and in some ways it's exactly what I imagine the two would be like. To be honest, I think Riza is right that it hardly matters whether they're married or not - they might as well be, at that point in their relationship, all the hell and heaven that they've been through together. And I actually adore your style of writing, descriptiveness, dialogue, and that delicious UST throughout the story.

Haha that's freaking awesome! One of the first FMA fanfics i've read and your story is definitely encouraging me to read more.

oh my god i loved this story!I feel bad because i'm one of those people who are too lazy to sign in and review but i really loved it! I know it's a one shot but it would be really cool if you did an epilogue or another associated one shot or is going straight in my faves!

'request for permission to fuck my aide senseless'

LMFAO! That was brilliant! And I like the darker side of humor. It can't be Royai without a little darkness, can it? XD

I enjoyed it very much. I like the darker type humour you used and its an interesting aspect of their personalities to explore. Very well done.

Love it. I think it felt like them if they were ever open about their relationship. I think at some point I will be writing a Royai fanfic, but I will have to outline it before I do it.

I'm so glad you didn't let it rot away on your laptop! This is perfect! I really enjoyed reading it and they weren't ooc at all! Great work!

Hahaha this is great. Had me laughing throughout!

Nice! I love it~

This was lovely! Very well done!