Rereading this story as a prelude to Desktop Dragon’s Awakening in the Dark.
Once I start rereading it I realize that I had read it before, but I also realize it was a really good story so I went ahead and re-read it l. Thanks for sharing your story.

GACK! You had Eric use Bill’s “sweetheart” endearment for Sookie. My skin crawled!

If even half of this had been in the SVM books, even just the rational exchange of POVs & consequences between E&S, CH would have had thousands fewer angry, wavering fans & former fans sending her negative thoughts. Can’t say I’m for women giving up rights & freedoms to be ruled over by their mates, but CH’s Sookie devolved into an immature, disrespectful, self-righteousness, selfish, obtuse, bitch so I grew less & less sympathetic for this character sometime about the midpoint of the series onward. I’d have been fine with everything in this chapter for her Sookie. And I remain a diehard, life-long, proud feminist.

That was a very interesting story. I enjoyed it; but also found it very odd and totally fitting at the same time. I love the creativity involved in creating these wonderful stories. I like your style, thank you!

I like where I think this is going..very interesting. So far I am enjoying the story, can't wait to see how I turns out.

Great story, I’ve read this before but enjoyed it anyway. I also like your Sookie and her willingness to please don’t me one other than herself. I especially like no nonsense Eric!

HOT

Man,how sad that Eric ,eventually became proud of being nothing more than his makers whore. From being a proud strong Viking warrior to being pumped out by his maker . And, Sookie girl really has problems too. She either running around acting foolish and bad mannered or incredibly stupid. I mean girl you don’t need Pam’s advice to statisfy your man.

thanks for sharing

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Eric's bullshit translates to "I don't want to let you have time to realize that becoming a vampire lets me have even more control over your life to the point of being able to torture you for a year."

Awww, Sookie's such a good little spineless doormat. Of course she shouldn't have the right to disagree with anything her owner says.

Way to go, Eric, you overreacting bastard! Way to terrorize, demean, and disrespect the woman you supposedly love!

Haha, that was super yummy! Thank you for sharing!

Can I say double yummy? :D

That was yummy!