Reviews for The Load |
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lizzie2020 chapter 8 . 6/12/2012 Loved it, can't wait for the next one |
DiosaNY09 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011 Are we gonna get another update for this awesome story? I would really love to see an update. |
bna208 chapter 8 . 7/31/2011 It's lokinn good, this is an awesome idea:) |
Byrd3-13 chapter 8 . 7/29/2011 I have a quesion. Do each of the authors make up what happens in their chapter or are they given a plot to write about? |
somethingalittlemoreclever chapter 8 . 6/24/2011 surprisingly, even with ll these authors, this is a great story...though each author does a little bit of a different interpretation of bella. sometimes she's really chatty (coffee chapter), or kick ass (chapter 8) or frightened (chapter when she peed herself and edward threatened her. edwards pretty consistant though. |
JecaroOn chapter 8 . 6/18/2011 Wow! I am loving this story! :D |
A Girl Who Reads Cereal Boxes chapter 8 . 6/2/2011 This story works amazingly well as a whole - all the authors really compliment each other and I love reading knowing that something that I think an author is hinting at in a chapter may not necessarily be the same plot arch as the next author. Look forward to the rest of the chapters :-) |
amynic1 chapter 8 . 5/15/2011 Great update- so happy to see Edward and Jasper connect again. Looking forward to more! |
covenmama chapter 3 . 5/13/2011 As ever, Kiya Raven has the laughs on her side! Awesome interaction with Emmett and the girls! |
elizabethan chapter 8 . 5/12/2011 Thank you TLIG for this chapter. *raises glass* Here's to special-ingredient brownies, Hannah Montana sheets, and girls with guns. And thank you for the self-pimpage - so glad I'm reading this story. |
2littleladies chapter 8 . 5/12/2011 The plot just keeps getting thicker. I hope Jasper doesn't end up like Edward. As for the UST between Bella and Edward, you could cut it with kids' safety scissors! They will eventually fuck like bunnies. The sock gorilla will be unleashed on her someday. Thanks! Kelly |
elizabethan chapter 7 . 5/12/2011 I think Edward should buy Bella some new jeans lol |
shinzonx chapter 8 . 5/12/2011 Awesome chapter! Mmm brownies. |
lisamichelle17 chapter 8 . 5/11/2011 This chapter was perfect. Thank you to TheLadyInGrey42 to writing it. A few of my thoughts: 1) In the beginning of the chapter, I was really worried at who could be at Bella's house. I loved that she went and woke Edward up who seemed to be in the midst of having a very erotic dream of Bella *winks* I also loved that the attraction that Bella feels for Edward intensified. I love UST and this chapter was full of it. 2) When Edward and Bella found out that it was only Jasper and Alice having a, ahem, private moment was awkward, funny and full of shock. I loved Bella "yelling" at Alice while Edward and Jasper was in a intense stare down. When Edward went to chase Jasper down was totally understandable. The fight that they had was damn nasty because Edward left his family. My heart aches for Esme and Jasper. They must really miss Edward, insanely. I am really worried that Jasper knows and works with Jane. That could be a lot of trouble. A lot of trouble. I look forward to what WindowWardsGirl comes up with in the next chapter. Thank you, again. |
KiyaRaven chapter 8 . 5/11/2011 Great chapter, ma'am. Thoroughly enjoyed it. K x |