I can say that the plot is great, the whole story in general... not really. Too many happening in too little a time. I can't help but feel as though the story is progressing too fast. if you desire better results, I suggest you to rectify that mistake. :)

I love this story so much

Inuyasha's sooo cute :3

I just want to smack them all upside the head.

give me a L give me a O give me a V give me a E give me a I give me a T whats that spell LOVE IT

Good story! U should like totally make a sequel.

love the story dang kagome really got into some trouble did miroku and sango find kilala was with them

i wanna know what sesshomaru's 'or else' means? O.O hahaha, well that was an exselent story, i really think it needs a few more chapters, like what happens with their son and all that stuff. oh, and im not complaining, just trying to help. when you use the word fallow, it has an entirely different meaning than your intended word follow.

fal·low1 /ˈfæloʊ/ Show Spelled[fal-oh] Show IPA

adjective

1. (of land) plowed and left unseeded for a season or more; uncultivated.

2. not in use; inactive: My creative energies have lain fallow this year.

yeah, i know it was just a spelling error, but i just wanted to help you out, cause someone else might not be able to read what you mean, even though you gotta be stupid not to figure out you ment follow. lol, well anyway, your a very talented writer, i love the imagery, it was a light fast read, and i enjoyed it emensely. .

Love it! Especially what you did to Kagome.

Thbis was a cute story, however, th horrid spelling and gramer really tok away from the overall enjoyability of the piece.

Totally awsesome dramatic. I read your first story fic and its on my favorites. I don't think you should've had Inuyasha running away like that and you should've made the endidng longer.

Love it! "Let me in" "GROWL" hehe

So cute! Ya know, I'd really like to see a drawing of a child from Sess/Yasha, wouldn't he/she just HAVE to be gorgeous?

Awesome! (sorry, just the only thing that came to mind)

I love your story so far :) So nice to see Kagome get some comeuppance for once, and really liking the turn with Sess/Yasha, although it would've been nice to have a piece between them about the mating thing :)