Tears in my eyes, beautiful. Love the way there are lots of clues for things, but it's rarely direct with the meaning.

This is so so good- how can you not like it? It's great and really emotional. Fantastic job

oh i love this. you are so amazing. why cant i be this brillant? this is heartbreaking/lovely/angsty wonderful. your use of the prompt was so brillant and amazing. the section with "so she wins" just blew me away. lovely lovely job. :)

What do you mean?

You dont like this!

Im so freaking moved, I cant even explain the ACHE in my chest!

Out of ALL the amazing Jade fics Ive read, I havent favored any of them (laziness mainly) but Im going to be reading this one over and over and over and over again because its just so damn sfslfsl;fjs

Its amazing.

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lovelovelove it. It was really dark.

(I know that doesn't sound like a compliment, but it is.)

This was dark. But oh so good!

I see this form of writing EVERYWHERE.

Call me stupid, but what form of writing is it?

:S Sorry I have not one clue.

Anyway...

I reallllly liked this and it almost had me to tears. I still dont like Tori. And oddly I feel bad for Jade. :(

Loved it!

~Ky

'S okay. I understand.

Dark & Depressing, two combinations that are hard to pull off so gracefully, but you managed it. I loved this.

The fact that they aren't together makes me sad. :(

"and all eyes are on Tori - and isn't that the way it should be."

That line is the whole reason why I am on Team Jade. :3

why don't you ever like your work? oh my gosh, i can't even. this is so sad. i think my favorite section was the one where jade expects him to only be thinking of tori when he dies, but he's actually thinking about jade, and the "so she wins" line /killed/ me. this is so gorgeous, i don't even know what to say about it. just stop being so hard on yourself, because seriously, this is so poignant and sad and goodness, it's beautiful.

sorry for such a crappy review, but honestly. i /loved/ this. fantastic work.

Holy crap, that was depressing. /3 I don't really understand why Tori was following her around, but poor Jade. Oh goodness. Beck's, "I don't know" near the end broke my heart. I can't stand them not being together. D: But thank you for writing, doll. I'll put this in the C2.