Heyyyyyyyyyyy. It's real good to see this story moving on! Though I hope the next story is coming soooooon. It's a very good story!

COOOOOOOOOL CHAP! OH YEAH, THIS IS GONNA BE SWEEEEEEEEEEET!

This is a very good Chapter! Ah see? me english is getting better! You are very nice 2 :) I hav heard from me friends that you are sweet! And you are!

Very gud chapter :) Your story is helping me english!

I hope everything coming is together good! And I can't wait to get an account on here, it'll be fun! Sorry for me English :)

Great job on this Chapter. I really enjoy your writing and believe that you'll keep making even more great Chapters like this. And lol, don't worry about the other comments about Zack being to flirty, he was a player in FF7 Crisis Core. Lol.

Good job.

-Steig from WBU

I hope Zack gets his morals straight TT_TT His slutty-ness is s-so out of character and claws me apart TT_TT Though I still have full faith in you! T_T Even though the scene still freaks me out.

-Love, Isabella

WHOAAAAAAAAAA, this brings me back! My favorite part was when Hojo was looked at Zack. It would be interesting if Hojo got a hold to Zack :D I wonder what would Sephiroth do :D

Awww I remember this scene, this is was a sweet scene with Aerith and Zack, even though I don't like her in the game,. for some reason she fits well when you give her a sister-like relationship with Zack :D

Oh i love your writing skills! I hope you keep writing! This is amazing )

Well ya got flirty Zack in character - Toooo flirty. Though good job!

I was 100% sure that Zack was going to like have a break down infront of Sephiroth o.o... Maybe that's just me o.o

Your a really good writer! I still find no flaws in this story!

This was a big shock at first o.o Knowing that Sephy had ACTUALLY put his trust in Zack? HAWT! BUT SWEEEEEEEET!

Aw confused Sephiroth is so adorable D I think he and Zack will make a VERY good pair ;D He's so-so- what's the word, worrying about his feelings!

Ohhhh yeah, Zacky seemed almost shy 3 Soooooo Kute!