aw, so sweet :) are you by any chance still taking requests?

You've got the tone for Demetri correct. The words are in the write tone and with the right attitude. Mostly. But I think you have him a bit out of character the farther you go along. I'd say until you got "Anya glanced my way" you were in perfect character for him.

hey, this was so cute! I liked Dimitri's ponderings a lot, I hope you write more. I think all characters were in character and the little deleted scene could fit perfectly in the film! ;)

Cute story so far, I can't wait to read more

Keep up the good work !

xox

so cute!

Aw, this was so good! Dimitri's adorable. Keep writing! :)

I liked it. Especially the part just before the ending where he admits it. Maybe you could do something about on the Tasha next.