Loved the first chapter but up on top you put Lily Luna Potter/James Potter when it is a Lily Evans and James Potter. Fix it please? When you write A/N's please don't put them in a story. Put them before you write the story or after the first chapter is done. There was a coupled grammar mistakes and hope one day that you edit the mistakes. Sorry for seeming mean, just that it's a good story only some things are wrong with it.

Just started the story, so can't say much. I do hope you will go back and correct the grammar mistakes though. You typed "new" instead of "knew" the entire chapter. Just thought you ought to know.

I love your story. Your little notes everywhere are fun to read. Can't wait till I finish it and find out how it ends.

Princess

COOL!

seriously do 12years old behave that way? i don't know for sure..

sheesh! cliffie! but great story still!

another great chappie!

well.. this chapter is as good as the previous ones..

interesting way the story is going..

that was a good cliffhanger.. but thankfully the story is already completed!

quite funny.. but it's good!

that's a very simple first chapter.. it could be better.. not as action-packed yet.. but still great nevertheless~~

Hey! Great chapter! I wish Lily and James would get together soon! Oh well, I'll just have to wait till I get there. *sigh* Lol! I really like your story! If Lily really did remember what Peter had done then maybe they wouldn't be dead. According to your story of course. JK hasn't said anything or written anything to hint that Peter did something to make the crew suspicious. Alright I'm gonna try to get in a few more chapters in before I have to leave. :)

OH MY GOSH! I can't believe you just did that! Aww... Oh well! I can't tell you how much I've been enjoying this story. I haven't reveiwed for the past chapters because I had to print them so I could read them. My mum kicked me off the computer. *sigh* I just got back on. I love this story! It's great. It has made me laugh almost the whole way through. What I'm wondering though is how could Snape have known what happened that night? Oh and that part where Vanessa, Lily and James lost their memory was a bit confusing. I can't wait to read more! I might have to print some more off to read it because my mum is going to get home soon and she will want to get on. I'll try to review soon! bye!

Um.. actually I don't think Voldemort was around then. He was there when Haggrid was, and Haggrid knew Lily and James, so we assume he was in the same generation... Hmm... so I really think you have your timeline messed up, but other than that, It's really good!