Such a good story, kept me hooked the entire time! Loved it 3 almost makes me sad that it's over, almost.

Absolutely wonderful! From beginning to end, this story certainly kept me intrigued. Again, wonderful! :)

Lovely fic! Normally, OCs are a huge turn off for me in fics, but you just managed to make it work so well - I think I'll miss Laurent and Bailey. Thank you for writing this. :)

I love this. It's great and touches me, the homosexuality was an exciting twist too.

awww do's it hav 2 be overz? i whts your devintart username?

AMAZING ENDING!

This chapter is probably one of the best. It was very captivating. I was pulled in throughout the whole thing.

I feel a tad sad that it's the end of the fic, but I'm glad that there will be more to the story.

Again, this was amazing.

a-comic

holy-fuck-i-just-jized

i love this story. amazing end, i was caught during all the chap

well written, and so addictive... you totally got me with this one.

No, no, you can't leave it like that! How could you end on such a vicious cliffhanger? Méprisable!

Okay, now that that is out of the way, wow. Easily one of the best TF2 fanfictions I have ever read, really. You portray all of the characters with their own intricate, unique personalities, you make the reader come to know them, like them (or dislike in Tristian's case), and then something horrible happens to them! D:

But it's wonderful, because you do a very good job of it. I had a bit of a hard time sorting out what exactly was happening toward the end of the last chapter, but that was probably my own error, no foul of yours.

So yes, pretty please update soon, if you'd be so kind! I absolutely cannot wait for the next installment!

-Mattic

words cannot describe what i am feeling. im not sure weither i should be happy for another amazing chappie or horrified at the brutality of it... all in all its purely amazing :)

Oh god, this had me on the edge of my seat the whole time!

Amazing chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

admin iz evil. chappie iz great and im totaly happy. :) poor lil bleu gettin messed wid by red :(

This story just keeps getting better!

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D

I adore this story to no end, I'll have you know. I love all the characters and when I play TF2, I feel differently about the snipers and spies. I usually hate them because I always get backstabbed and sniped. . But you actually make me like them again. Please update soon!

awww :) so cute! i love your story and totaly cant wait until youb update again!