Could you please write more of this? I love it so far!

Genial HH

Great! But it's a tragedy that it's unfinished. Love it though! Awesome job.

I Wait for the Next Chapter my friend Joselito Out.

You should definitely continue this story! It's really good!

Please update! Interesting so far!

when are u going to make the next chapter ? its really good so far

This is fantastic so far! I really love it. Can't wait to read the next part! These two are so sweet together. And Rudy... Do I sense foreshadowing?

Ash has become such a pervert!

This is a very good story. I read your prequel "The Best Birthday Gift" and that was very good as well. I am very well looking forward to the next two parts. :D

This is a great story so far. When will u update? also maybe u could have Ash propose 2 Misty at sunset on the beach.

hey, great chapter the ending was really touching also you should go on youtube and type in pokemon black and white music emotion its really touching and makes you want to cry when i heard it it made me remember the original pokemon anime with the original trio along with all the good times i had watching the show as a kid and playing the games.

I enjoyed this one a lot. Loved the play battle they had, especially when Misty rode on Gyrados "Empress of the sea." I was also surprised that she picked out that very skimpy bikini for Ash (lucky dude). If anything, Misty's jealousy is worse than Ash's I think. Like how you did Psyduck in this one too. I can't wait until the next chapter.

very nice fic you have keep up the good work and update soon!

Well it's very interesting once again, and I love the way Ash and Misty's relationship is turning out. The only thing I still have to say is that you still need to work on their personalities a little, their speech is too general still. I honestly think that's the only thing that needs to be worked on, you fix that, and you've got a masterful and fluffy story.