Ha! Loved this interaction. You have a lovely writing style :D

I have no idea why I love this...but I do. I love it so much!
I really like your general writing style, I'm currently reading sons of the desert, and it's a great source of inspiration for my story Phoenix and the Flame.

O.o that was freaking hilarious! I loved it. I love the song that was playing when Kimbley walked in. I knew almost every one of those songs except 'You smile, I smile'. Do you mind telling me what song that was?

Xd lol this was great. Obviously, Mr. Garfiel doesn't like Missus Lust too much, now does he? Haha great job on the writing, btw. And I totally laughed at Kimblees choice of opening theme song.

Dang white boy bomb-happy psychopathic pale freak (whose hat doesn't fly of on a moving, stinking train!)

I LOVE YOU, SCAR! (Wayward Son)

odearlord! **cackles** So totally A/U, yet so totally IC, and so completely crack! Thank you so much for the giggles.

Ahh, Scar the Stealth Whore! XDD

Sounds a bit like a stalker. Scar the Stalker! No-one can escape his stalking skillage!

I loved it! Garfiel must have been having such a good morning until Lust came in and stole the attention of his pretty, man customers.

Was that some KibleexGarfiel interaction then?

If so awesome and if not... well I'll still imagine it was to amuse myself.

Great story, I hoper there's a sequel!

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Well Written! I hope you'll make a sequel even if you put it as completed with Ed, Al, Mustang and everyone.

I think you shouldn't have put the song lyrics, most people skip over it.

Other than that I love it!

That was absolutely brilliant! I loved it, excellent writing and it painted a beautiful picture in my head. I loved the way you portrayed the characters.

Anyways, great job!

Uhh... I'm not quite sure what to think of that.

Well, nicely done, anyway.

i like it. good job. very original XD and i like how the songs play into this.

Mortichai

I thought this would be interesting since...let's just say I love Starbucks the way Cornello loves free-thinking societies XD But seriously, funny. Especially psychic!Yoki.

Was that part supposed to be kind of GarfielxKimblee or is my mind just that effed up?

Poor Lust is unwelcome XD Maybe she'd find friends at Dunkin Donuts. Write that plz.

"Some of us aren't attention whores." WHY was this line not put in the series, dammit Arakawa...

That was rather interesting.